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HE asked her if SHE ever loved HIM.SHE thought of it for a moment.The thought itself gave her an answer.SHE knew it years back when HE came into her life.SHE wasn't ready to love HIM.But HE remained her habit.And this question ,all of a sudden,forged an array of thoughts.SHE had always wanted to be with her teenage crush.SHE loved him when he caressed her.SHE liked it when he passed by her.
Now SHE was keen and curious to return to the past.And SHE knew...To decline HIM would put an end to the camouflage.HE asked if HE should stay until SHE was okay to start a new life.SHE knew,'The okay has vanished with years.And the only question was"should HE stay or leave!" '.
Without much thought,SHE left .SHE didn't look back.But her crush remained intact.HE looked from behind and was certain that SHE will never return..Because HE was heard,collected ,and invented.
As always,PROFESSION smiled defeatedly in front of PASSION.
And yes,this is a story of the three- The story directed by SHE who had a mental conflict on choosing between "PASSION", her crush and "PROFESSION",her lover.....And stories never end.....
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Waiting for your next update 😉
Thank you so much....More to go...
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शब्द नहीं हैं......
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उन सब को गोली मार...इंतजार नहीं कर सकता...😇😇😇
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What a climax. ..well said...😍😍😍
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Read it thrice.. Nicely done :)
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I have GOT to say... That is one crazy imagination you have there. Of the good kind😋. Kudos for the metaphors. They were lovely. It IS a fun way to think about them😁...
ReplyDeleteIf you ask me, I would suggest you skip the last paragraph and let the reader figure out the real story. It is half the fun!
And your suggestion is granted..haha..probably ,the fun chasing for more..Thank you so much,...Keep supporting:)
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Missed your scripts yesterday..
ReplyDeleteGreat work again.! ^_^
Thank you for the 'missing part'..Luved it..
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ReplyDeleteWow.. the climax changed the whole story..
ReplyDeleteHope the comment has a positive connotation..Thank you dude..
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ReplyDeleteBlooomsyyyyyyyyyy!
ReplyDeleteRead it twice! My, what an unexpected twist that was! Brilliant ! :D
haha....Thank you dude...Sometimes,twists are the lil 'extra' people talk about, a pseudonym for a miracle??...Keep supporting..
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ReplyDeleteHah.....loved the way the whole thing turned around with "profession smiled defeatedly in front of passion". Great imagination :-)
ReplyDeleteWhen imagination coincides realisation,things work out..Thank you so much..keep supporting
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When imagination coincides realisation,things work out..Thank you so much..keep supporting
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നന്നായിട്ടുണ്ട്.. എനിക്ക് ഇംഗ്ലീഷ് വായന കുറവാണു.. എങ്കിലും നല്ല എഴുത്ത്.. അവസാന പാരഗ്രാഫ് ഒഴിവാക്കിയാൽ കുറച്ചു കൂടി വായനക്കാരെ ചിന്തിപ്പിക്കാമായിരുന്നു.. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much..The last part was just a a circle of the whole plot.Will go with the suggestion...keep supporting;
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Woowwww!!!! Great imagination and awesome Climax!!!Really a thought provoking one!!
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Good writeup!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it.
Metaphor.. loved it
Presentation.. loved it
Indecision.. don't love it... But as an artistic representation, loved that too
And your analysis made my day..Thank you so much..Expecting support all the time..
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The conflict of choosing between Crush & Lover... A different level of imagination...
ReplyDeleteGreat one with a unusual twist... Superb!!
Yeah..I think we always go by such conflicts..Anyway,Thank you very much....
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ReplyDeleteWait what.....?!
ReplyDeleteAdipoli Twist at the Ending
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Thank you so much...more to go..keep supporting!!
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Omg!!!! U guys this is soooo cool! Actually I had actually got only the last part first and was trying to figure out what it was! Then came came here!!!! This is amazing u Guys!!!!! Waiting for more of ur works!!!! Keep goin! All te best
ReplyDeletehaha...Thank you so much...More in store..keep supporting dude..
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Thank you so much...keep supporting..more to go..
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I bet u guys vl go really far and do awesome works all the best ! Already a big fan of ur works 😉
DeleteThats really nice of you...Thank you very much...
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ReplyDeleteGreat work. .no other words to say..just loved it..
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Thank you so much...Liked the' no wors to say' part..haha..keep supporting
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