Thursday 9 February 2017




                      ### CoNfeSSion@........................!!

           

                    She thought it one last moment.."CONFESSION!!"🙏..She was ready to go with it😶.

It all began a few months ago ➼when she knew she could no longer be happy with her husband.☝After all,what does a diploma graduate have to do anything with the life of an IIM guy?✋ And this thought eventually led to 'It all began' story.😫 A love story in her marital life;what they call 'After marital relation' with decorations.

She was travelling by bus when she first saw him❤Then they met several times accidentally.She knew she had seen him somewhere.And this knowledge indeed turned dangerous.She could not get him out of her head👀👀As for certain,they built a bond hard to break.💗💗And he asked her if she could step into his life.Born into a family rich in tradition,she knew 'her husband 'was her God.😞But by then,she had breached the unannounced pact.😳

She thought it one last moment,"CONFESSION!!"..She did not care its impact.She was ready to set out of her benchmark😑.She was scared to do it.😟But in the backyard of her mind,she had"confession" engraved.Her mind jumping on thoughts was immediately brought on track when her husband said,"What is it?I gotta go!!"
The feelings residing within her for almost a year came in full length💓. She closed her eyes tight and extended her arms.She said,"If you don't mind,can you go through this novel?It's the work of a year.A company has agreed to publish it.I want your opinion on this."
He smiled ☺and remarked,"Good!!"
Behind the smile,he held back his love for her,because he knew she is to go on with this so called 'After marital 'relation 
Feelings of the whole year have dissolved in thin air.And yes,she sensed, the love in the last  few months has had a wonderful climax.
He took the book from her and walked  💋💋thinking how deeply he loves her ways.  



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22 comments:

  1. A nice capture of human feelings...sincere work bloom

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    1. Thank you so muchhh......Is it really a nice capture?? huhu..I am not quite sure.But liked the way you commented..keep supporting.
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  2. Every post I read on ur page makes me read it twice so that I grasp the complete essence of it. All of ur works me think for a while. And that is what a good story feels like. Soothing to the heart and mind. Good job guys. Good job. U make many ppl happy every day vt ur works!!!! Do more. Like a post per day. I know it's difficult. But I bet ppl vl get addicted to like serials and would never miss a post of urs ! Good job guys good job! Proud of u

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    1. Wowwww....Thank you so much..And when I say it,trust me,it's from the core of my heart..Hoping to see more of your comments..
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  3. After all of us need a moral support... Nice work dear

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    1. Thank you so much...Keep supporting dear friend
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  4. great work...

    HE..SHE..LOVE..AFTER MARITAL RELATION...
    everything forming a good feel...
    nicely framed one..
    and 'CONFESSION'
    a perfectly perfect title.. :)
    good luck for upcoming posts.

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    1. Thank you so much...I understand that you really enjoy reading these..And expecting more of your support..
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  5. Nice portrayal of 'after marriage' scenario 😊😊👌🏻....by the way, does the portion with the IIM guy going a li'l harsh on his feelings imply as to him indirectly encouraging her to strive more? 🤔; which is quite unlike the direct sense(crct me if I'm wrong)

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    1. Yup..You got it right there..Thats what is detailed in the last para..You are going perfectly well with your analysis..keep supporting..Thank you so much
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  6. Her decision to confess was right. It takes the burden away...
    'Confession'!! Really felt good reading this work... Keep up such amazing works guys!!!

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    1. Thank you so much dear friend..Yup...It does take the burden away..Confession really works...Keep supporting
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  7. Good story.. keep going...


    I am friend of Vinod & Leena

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    1. Thank you so much..Convey regards to Leena & Vinod..They hav e been supporting a while .Keep supporting dear friend..
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  8. Wonderful work on the metaphors as always... More of them please 😊😊
    One thing i couldnt figure was that the husband had to keep quiet and not let her know his true reactions and emotions to encourage her to do what she liked. Kinda depressing dont ya think?
    'We could all be living with a tag on our head saying "Appreciate me"'- Robin Sharma (Something like that. Read the book a long time ago😅

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    1. Yup...It's more like,the husband doesn't know to show emotions and the lady discovers herself trying not to find happiness in people..Ultimately, thats what we are meant for ..Finding happiness in ourselves..But I do agree with the depressing part of it..Thank you so much for the comment..Keep supporting..
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  9. How amazing is that nowadays reading your stories could instantly cheer me up whenever am having a heavy day!!!Guyzzzz,this is totally cool...Keep 'Blooming'😃

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  10. How amazing is that nowadays reading your stories could instantly cheer me up whenever am having a heavy day!!!Guyzzzz,this is totally cool...Keep 'Blooming'😃

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    1. That's so nice of you dude.Thank you so much.keep supporting.
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  11. Oh god !!!!
    Simply Awesome.. Every paragraph is Bliss 😇😀
    Waiting for Next one Fingers crossed !!!!

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    1. Thank you so much.Loved your comment.More on store.
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