Saturday 18 February 2017

  The Dreams That Could Let Her Shine...!!!!!  



            I opened the album.📗There was a lil girl looking at me.👧She was cute and smiled hard😁.Her tenderness revealed immaturity☺. Her kohl spread eyes displayed her mother's expectations⺟.Her hand holding a toy car called for dreamsᗥ.Her feet ready to move taught me stubbornness👣. Her shabby hair told me, "She doesn't care"😆.And in short, she was ready to bloom. Just like a flower bud desiring for the Sun, she was yearning for future. 🎕
            
            I flipped through the pages📗.And there I saw, a grown up figure gazing at me. She was beautiful and smiled softly☻. Her squared face disclosed maturity. Carefully lined eyes showed the need for people's approval.〠☹Her hand, holding a car key defined responsibility⤫. Her feet fixed on the ground detailed decision👣. Her neatly tied hair shouted,"social taming". And in short, she was ready to settle...Settle to social needs.☝
            
             I closed the album and looked up to the mirror.And there she was.😧.The grown up figure whose life was polished beyond question.☺ But somewhere in the midst of refining, she lost her wild dreams.
The dreams that could let her shine..💗
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    1. Thank you very much..Expecting your support in the upcoming posts..
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  2. wahhhhhhh
    oowsmmm one
    nice way of representation.. :)
    #simile at major parts

    keep up the gud work

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    1. Thank you so much..Hope this served a good read...Keep supporting..Bloom values ur comment.
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  3. I wish to flip those pages.. good thought..

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    1. Thank you for 'good thought'...Yup..That was a mere thought indeed..Thank you so much...keep supporting..
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  4. Felt like it's from your heart...! Really touching..!!

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    1. Things written are always from the heart, I think..Thank you so much...hope u will lyk the upcoming posts as well
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  5. From a cute little girl to a beautiful lady..!!Long journey!!..Loved the way you presented it..
    Great work..Keep going..

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    1. Yup...That definitely is a long journey and it's easy to make it short through memories, thoughts and all..And thats what is done here..Hope you enjoyed it...Expecting your support in the upcoming posts as well
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  6. Beautiful way to tell the story. More pages of the album please😋.

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    1. haha..More pages are in there, scattered..lets hope to have them united again to bring out the best album ever..Thank you so much..keep supporting..
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    2. Waiting for the best album ever😊

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    3. I hope this won't take long..Thank you so much.
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  7. Geetz....Never put away those wild dreams in your life.
    Your Chai

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    1. Huhu..Chai...Never ,, unless and until I get lost enroute...lets hope, it doesn't happen..huhu...Thank you so much...I would love to have your support for the upcoming posts as well
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  8. Very beautiful portrayal of each detail...loved the way you related every detail to that particular stage of life....👌🏻👌🏻 About losing your dreams....Well, I guess they are never lost; you just feel that its too late to chase them....and I don't think you need a comment to remind yourself that its never late 😌

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    1. yup.....Thank you so much..As always, U r going deeper with your views..And thats appreciable..Would love to see ur comments in the upcoming posts as well
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  9. Nicely related the details to different stages in life.... nice one n keep them coming...

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    1. Thank you so much...Until there is support, I shall continue here...Keep supporting dude...Hope you will enjoy the next one too
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  10. Nicely related the details to different stages in life.... nice one n keep them coming...

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  11. Beautifully shown how things change over time!! And how people become socially tamed ��

    Great one!!

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    1. Yup....Things change over time..That exactly is the essence of the complete article..haha..Thank you so much.Looking forward for ur comments in the upcoming posts as well
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  12. Beautiful explanations....good work
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    1. Thank you so much....Would like to see your comments in upcoming posts as well...♡♡♡

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  13. Awsome words !!!
    Keep it up
    Full support Kudoos

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    1. Keep supporting dude. Hope you'll enjoy the upcoming ones too..♡♡♡

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