Monday 30 January 2017

                           

                                 👧 WITHOUT EVER TELLING HIM THIS..!!👦


She👧 walked out,after the class
Her eyes wandered from under the glass
There he👦 was,next to his friend,
With a smile,ready to lend.

Her heart froze, and her thoughts spread
She 👧let her thrill ,through the book she👧 held.
Oh Dear!!How she👧 wished to be his..
Without ever ,telling him this.

There she👧 walked,with her eyes down,
Only to look up,when he👦 calls down
She👧 wasn't shy,nor was she👧 weak
But with him around,She👧 was all sleek
She👧 knew in her heart,
That could change her day to an art
Bingo!!He👦 calls and smiles
The smile that would light her styles!
If a smile meant something,
Then that something was her everything....

                                                                             ♡♡♡

                                                                          
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24 comments:

  1. Unknown30 January 2017 at 09:08

    owwwww
    that's too romantic.....
    feeling deja vu with a delay factor.....


    If a smile meant something,Then that something was her everything..

    this lines... heart beat of above one :D
    again a magical spell.....

    keep going..


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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:14

      Thank you so much...keep supporting..:)
      ♡♡♡

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  2. Unknown30 January 2017 at 09:15

    You are making me read your lines more n more...😃

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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:15

      And there is more to go..Thank you so much..
      ♡♡♡

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  3. Unknown30 January 2017 at 09:16

    Something was her everything.. <3
    Kudos dear!

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  5. arathi30 January 2017 at 09:27

    Gud to see that u r so passionate about writing:)
    Regards :)

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  6. Unknown30 January 2017 at 09:30

    No words to express how simple yet so cute this is... And ya, Brilliantly portrayed!! <3 Hope you find much more stories around you ;)

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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:22

      Yeah...And that was a real story of someone around me...You got it rgt..haha..Thank you so muchh
      ♡♡♡

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  7. Unknown30 January 2017 at 09:40

    If i was to swap them and be the guy....adding these

    "He shuffled his feet to her
    trying hard not to be a cur.
    Thought his smile was a bright star
    hardly knowing his face matched a jar.
    one straight look into his eye
    and he waved a big good bye."

    would have completed my story...

    "Without ever telling him this": A pleasant one!!!

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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:22

      That was a good one..The guy version will come soon..
      Thank you so much..
      ♡♡♡

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  8. Athira Suresh30 January 2017 at 09:44

    Simple,cute,realistic...
    'The smile that would light her styles'...really loved it..:)

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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:26

      Thank you so much...keep supporting
      ♡♡♡

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  9. Unknown30 January 2017 at 10:24

    :)

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  10. ZYRELEX31 January 2017 at 10:25

    बिंगो... 🙈🙈🙈.लत लग😇... अगले एक के लिए इंतजार कर.. 😐

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    1. Bloom1 February 2017 at 05:27

      Wait and watch..haha...Thank you so much..
      ♡♡♡

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  11. Unknown1 February 2017 at 09:02

    "How she👧 wished to be his..
    Without ever ,telling him this."

    Butterflies flying in my stomach, lol! It was exciting to read it and I looked forward to a fulfilling end and when it came, it was so rewarding :P Keep weaving more of these :P
    Cheerio!

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    1. Bloom3 February 2017 at 07:35

      haha..Thank you dude..looking for comments in d upcoming posts as well..keep supporting..
      ♡♡♡

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  12. SnehaB2 February 2017 at 09:34

    Lovely lines.... true words many college girls have in their thoughts.... but some one special like u puts them together
    Nice n keep it up!!!

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    1. Bloom3 February 2017 at 07:37

      Yeah...U got it there..That was exactly what is portrayed..And it's a true one,from one in my friend circle..:)
      ♡♡♡

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