☹LIAR☹
I handed her the gift💝today
She laughed light,anyway
She asked me if I needed a b'day treat🎂
I told her'Thanks for the greet'
'It's special',she told in a hustle
My mouth remained in muzzle
I wanted her to know my mind
But she was in a state, not to mind
I saw her sparkling eyes,
It held no such lies
I soon knew,I was the Liar☹
To have kept this secret mire
That night,I took my diary note📕
which waited for her response to note.
which waited for her response to note.
Suddenly I knew I was ready for the truth
And jotted down,"She will remain my untruth".☹
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Great thinking..
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wowww...
ReplyDeleteawesome one.... loved it
I wanted her to know my mind
But she was in a state, not to mind--------
outstanding lines.. keen imagination
That night,I took my diary note📕
which waited for her response to note.---------
DIARY NOTE WHICH WAITED FOR HER RESPONSE TO NOTE
again too gud lines
good luck
keep going
Thank you...Loved the 'keen imagination' part.
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'She will remain my untruth'..yeah!!Some things are meant to remain as THE UNTRUTH...
ReplyDeleteGreat work again:)
Yeah!You are right.Thanks for the comment.Keep supporting.
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Truths are not meant to be untruths anyways😌
ReplyDeleteLet her know some day😍
Aww...That's so sweet:).Keep supporting.
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"Suddenly i knew i was ready for the truth" The guts to face the truth!! Not everyone has that!! 😩
ReplyDeleteAgain an amazing one!!
Loved 'the guts to face truth.Not everyone has that' part.Thanks for the comment.
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You just have to keep trying to do good work, and hope that it leads to more good work
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Wonderful work as always. Maybe some things are better left unsaid. Keep it up!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.Loved your comment.Hope you'll like the upcoming ideas too.
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Everyone has lied (in this context) at some point...atleast me for sure 😄😄..not the diary part though 😋.
ReplyDeleteA common experience for most of us...loved the way the whole idea was framed👌🏻
Haha...!!Keep supporting dude:).
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It's quite impressive guys...good work
ReplyDeleteThank u soo much dude.Wait for more..keep supporting.
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I can feel that moments..!! Great work..
ReplyDeleteThank you so much...Feel good that I could touch your feelings...Keep supporting..:)
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