Saturday 25 March 2017

PERHAPS, THERE ARE REASONS...


                           She looked outside through the window. But there was not a trace of a bike.Was she expecting? Before she could recollect her thoughts, her phone beeped. 
And the message read, "Tell me the exact location."
By that time, she had started having second thoughts. She typed in a haste, "Hey, I don't think the challenge is worth it. Drop the matter and ride back."
But he was glued to his decision.
"It is one thing to not take up a challenge than to take and lose. I would rather go for the latter."

Yeah...She was a crazy stuff...Eccentric..Arrogant..And even a condemner at times...But the whole idea of aiding a boy to find her house and betting him to come up at night seemed like an odd combo of all these.Somehow, the wager seemed terribly ridiculous.

The phone beeped again.This time, she felt a panic.The message read, "I am at the junction. Which path should I take?"

Her mind was recalculating all the possible ways to get out of the troubles. But her heart, which loved music. art and all matters that were not considered practical in the world, concluded that it preferred to see something wild . Before her mind could read answers, her hands had given the location. The  more she thought of the entire thing, the more confused she felt. She heard a tyre creaking all of a sudden. She looked out. There he was, decisive and resolute.She literally laughed. No complications,,, no second thoughts..He did not honk, nor did he create a commotion. That moment was like a spell, strong enough to push sidewalls. But the purity of the spell left with him, when he drove off. 

She flashed through her memories. When he told her there was something about her, she had laughed off. Eventually, she has even shown him her house. Where was she heading to?
She saw her parents chitchatting merrily.With the sight of them, she felt her heart heavy. And to feel phony around them, she believed, is the greatest sin ever. She called her dad and told the entire story. Though he wore an expression of shock, he spoke with a a controlled tone,"You tend to complicate your life, as if living weren't already complicated enough. Take it easy...Things happen at this age..And take it as a form of present.Presents are given for the pleasure of the one giving it and not for the one who is receiving it. Take it that way, dear." And he wished her good night.

If someone ever has a daughter- A blessing no one would wish on anyone, because it' almost a law that sooner or later, she will break her dad's heart- that someone will begin, without realising it, to divide men into 2 camps: those who are trying on her and those who are not. Whoever says that's not true is lying through his teeth.

Silence and doubt gnawed at her. She knew the feeling she had was 'floating' and not 'falling'..Moreover, she did not want to be the one playing with a boy like a cat with a canary.
She wondered what on earth he saw in her that could make him feel to befriend her, other than her eagerness to escape into the unknown worlds and second hand dreams.

She took her phone and typed:
" Oil asked a half filled cup of pure water, 'May I fill you?'
The cup replied, 'Try it. But the result, I suppose, will only be an emulsion.'
But the oil tried knowing ,the difference cannot be made. And the cup thanked him for trying"
She clicked the send button and turned her phone off.


                                                     courtesy: A student , CET Engineering college, The shadow of the wind(a mystery I have read)

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15 comments:

  1. wowww
    fantastic one
    dad's words-- too great 😊😊😊

    "She wondered what on earth he saw in her that could make him feel to befriend her, other than her eagerness to escape into the unknown worlds and second hand dreams". this part made my day.. 😇😇😇😇
    second hand dreamss .. nice imagination
    and from my personal view
    no matter what she is... he will see all her imperfections as perfectly perfect to him...
    :-P :-P :-P
    something honest will strike there.

    oil water representation again made the story something special.
    great work friend ..

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    1. Oil, water thing was a thing I thought of for days..And thank you for the mention of the same. There is this friend of mine who joked of mixing detergent to the combo..A small drop of it will avoid one's confusion..huhu...Anyway, Thank you so much dude..You hav been a gud reader..Keep supporting:)
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  2. Nice one!!
    Her confusion of where she was heading and her father's advice to her... She valued her parent's happiness more than anything...

    "She knew that the feeling that she had was 'floating' and not 'falling' "... Great��. Most of us go through the floating stages until we finally fall...����
    Looking forwrd for more of your works...

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    1. But floating is always different from falling..Once you start to float, you must hav a fair idea on the difference.And, if one doesn't get the difference, then one might have fallen..remember, It's always a 'might'..Not even a 'may'..(just kidding)..Thank you so much..Keep supporting dude..Thank you for the comment
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  3. I must tell you..Each every story of yours is so touching..!

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    1. Thank you so much dude...Hoping your comments in the upcoming posts as well..
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  4. Haah....nice one :-) Had a really good vibe reading the whole thing.... :-) she was floating and not falling....as of now, a definite yes....but in the course of time? :-P

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    1. Thank you for the 'good vibe' part..Let's watch and see what happens in the course of time...;)huhu..Thank you so much..keep supporting.
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  5. Incredible work! The way i feel about it, I cant entirely put them into words. There so much to praise. Purity of the spell (Excellent choice of words), Dads words, 2 camps. That is true. I did not get what you meant by second hand dreams though.
    And last of all.. The oil and water. The metaphor was masterfully done.
    I know I dont have to say this. Keep going😉

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    1. Feel good that you liked the metaphor..And the choice of words have the beauty when you are ready to lend your heart to a write up. Second hand dreams are those built and nourished by someone around..In her life, she had adopted the dreams of people she admired(rather than discovering one for herself)..Thank you so much for the comment..Expecting your views in the upcoming posts as well..
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  6. Fabulous experience while reading through the story.Really great thinking.Keep it Up!!!!!

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    1. Thank you so much...Thank you for 'fabulous experience' and even for the 'great thinking'..To be genuine, this is not a mere thinking.This is something that happened in the life of a girl..Hoping your comments in the upcoming posts as well
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  7. Great work again..!! Kudos to the metaphor..It was really worth reading..

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    1. Thank you so much...Thank you for being an avid reader..If it was really worth reading, then the pleasure is mine..Thank you for 'Great work'..Keep supporting:)
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  8. Impressive! Great work. 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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