Friday 24 March 2017


THE DAY!!!!!!


Cries....Loud cries...Relatives waited outside for the baby girl
It was dawn break.They named her, 'The Day'.
They blessed her with wishes. The child that could meet their expectations was right in front of them to live a whole life.They had a lot to do for, 'The Day'.The way she should grow, surrealism in thoughts and duty in actions...They had a lot to teach her.
She grew, seeing a bloom blossom, watching the birds chirping, wondering at the shining river water..And what more!!She thrilled everyone around. The surroundings showered her with great love..
She grew.
Glowing with miraculous power, she lit even fine grains of sand. She was omnipresent and, her power never diminished. But to her dismay, she was rewarded only with admonishments. Every street corner corner envied her for her enthusiasm. But the constant jibes held a postion somewhere in the sleek part of her heart. And her dreams got shattered. But her youth didn't stand long.Middle age crawled in.
Yes...She grew..
She knows for sure that she has started losing the ace. But she tried to keep up. Though not so powerful, she was in there lighting up tender love,  appreciating family reunion . But this was close to nothing.
She grew old. She lost her sheen. The blooms once blossomed were bidding farewell. The birds didn't exchange words with her.Instead, they set their nests up. River water turned calm and quiet in her presence. Yes..She was decaying. Her old age was devouring her. She knew the end was soon. Without much fanfare, she bit the dust. As her tomb, her family set 'Moon'.

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  1. MADOVERFOOD24 March 2017 at 08:52

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  2. MADOVERFOOD24 March 2017 at 08:55

    coool
    that's gud one
    wordings for the transformation of child to elder is so nice
    great literature part :)



    "she lit even fine grains of sand. She was omnipresent and, her power never diminished" loved this whole part
    excellent work
    keep going

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:12

      Thank you very much..The article had been in thought for a long tym..And it was my friend who wanted me to go wth it as well.
      yeah..that happens many tyms wen one is at one's youth.One lights d whole world around (just lyk a wife conpared wth the midday).thank u for d cmnt

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  3. Unknown25 March 2017 at 01:01

    Beautiful comparison of 'The Day' with a girl... Her stages of growth just like a day advances ��... Expectations of people on her, 'The Day'... ��
    The thought and the way it is put into words, hats off to both...
    Keep up the good work guys ��

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:14

      Thanknu so much..In fact, I lyked d way u put it..U hav gone a lil deeper, it seems;grabbing on intricacies.And that was so nyc

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  4. Unknown25 March 2017 at 09:42

    �������� Regarding the part where the day receives only admonishments in return.....how about thinking it this way; the same person had planned out what to teach and how 'she' should grow as described in the beginning....so will it not be better to reconsider as to what to teach, rather than reproving 'her'? :-) Comparing day to a child was a unique one....a good one indeed :-) Great work :-)

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:19

      In fact, the whole idea was to put d stages of growth of a gal child with a complete day..And people, in general do not really appreciate mid day..That happens when a very common lady puts out her light, as to gain fame and freedom.But the positive outlook was good indeed..Thank u so much for the comment..Expecting ur cmnts throughout.

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  5. Krish25 March 2017 at 10:49

    This one went for a different outlook. From dawn to the moon. That is a nice way to look at life. But some may shine the brightest at dusk, some at night... You can never tell. All you can do is hope for the best and keep going! And yeah never stop blooming😋

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:22

      That's rgt..Some may shine at dusk, some at ngt.I will consider dat, perhaps in sone other wrk!..huhu..Let's always hope , life shines all d way..Thank u so much for d comment.
      yup..atleast for bloom readers, or until I hav nothing to come out with, bloom will keep blooming...haha

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  6. deepak28 March 2017 at 17:09

    Woww!!!A very interesting one.And my personal favorite of all your writings.The idea of comparison of the day with a girl is a nice concept.Good work!!

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:23

      Thank u so much...Happy to know dat, dis turned out b ur favourite...Let many such writings come to me..huhu..Keep supporting bro!!

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  7. Athira Suresh30 March 2017 at 06:06

    Best choice of words as always..:)Keep going...

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    1. Bloom20 April 2017 at 08:26

      Thank u so much dear...In fact the whole idea was given by a friend of mine who has a greater bent for creativity..I pray to let those ideas come eveytym..HAHA....Keep supporting

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  8. Star Dust15 April 2017 at 08:29

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