Friday 27 January 2017

LILY

  LILY

In a pleasant morning,the Sun shining
I woke up very fresh
To the garden,I rush!
There she was,waiting for me..
Dancing in the wind and smiling at me
Like a fairy,a color of trust
Little Lily flower,all wet
She is neither a friend nor a foe
But her beauty made me furry though!
She chuckled,and her fragrance spread
She was shy,and bowed her head
Then I saw a sizzling bee
For whom she set her life free

That eve was calm and plain
I rushed to see her once again
There I found her laying still
Down in the mud,all chill
Nature mourned her death 
Turning black and dull
Little fairy bidding away
'She lived her life' anyway!!
                                                               
                                                                    ♡♡♡
                                                                                                                     

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34 comments:

  1. Unknown27 January 2017 at 06:24

    awesome lines :)
    great flow



    "Then I saw a sizzling bee
    For whom she set her life free"
    this one really good one..


    carry the awesomeness.....
    keep going.....
    :)

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 07:16

      Thank you:)Hope you'll like the upcoming ideas too..
      ♡♡♡

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  2. Unknown27 January 2017 at 06:52

    Your Lilly flower...These lines have a deep feeling...Really good..!!!

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:31

      Thank you very much....more to see...
      ♡♡♡


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  3. Unknown27 January 2017 at 07:00

    Bittersweeet :):
    Neither a friend, nor a foe
    her beauty made me furry though :D
    Liked this one!
    I like where this is going :)

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:34

      Cool...Thank you for 'I like where this is going'..!!Mor to see..:)
      ♡♡♡


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  4. Unknown27 January 2017 at 07:22

    Awesome...:)super cool...keep going

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:32

      Thank you so much...keep supporting:)
      ♡♡♡

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  5. Unknown27 January 2017 at 07:22

    Awesome...:)super cool...keep going

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  6. Unknown27 January 2017 at 07:39

    Great work.! Loved it.. Go ahead.:)

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:36

      Thank you so much...Hope you 'll like the next one too..
      ♡♡♡

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  7. Unknown27 January 2017 at 07:45

    Nice

    Jananam maranam...

    Jeeeeeeeevitham...

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:37

      aha!!Thank you so much...That was a real good comment..!
      ♡♡♡

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  8. Rithika27 January 2017 at 07:57

    Nice one..keep going..😊

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:38

      Thank you so much...keep supporting:)
      ♡♡♡

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  9. Hashmelons27 January 2017 at 08:08

    Awesome ! Got to read some good lines :-)

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:39

      Thank you soooo much..hope u 'll get to see more in the coming days..
      ♡♡♡

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  10. Unknown27 January 2017 at 09:02

    Your Lilly flower...These lines have a deep feeling...Really good..!!!

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  11. Unknown27 January 2017 at 09:15

    Simple yet beautiful!! Looking forward for more... :)

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    1. Bloom27 January 2017 at 18:41

      Thank you soooo much...More to see..:)
      ♡♡♡

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  12. Narayana Pai27 January 2017 at 20:05

    KEEP GOING ♡

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  13. SnehaB27 January 2017 at 21:24

    Very beautiful lines!!! Keep writing...

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  14. Unknown27 January 2017 at 22:56

    nice lines...awesome

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  15. ZYRELEX28 January 2017 at 07:44

    बँध..... अधिक के लिए इंतजार... ������

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  16. Unknown28 January 2017 at 16:39

    good one...simple n elegant

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    1. Bloom29 January 2017 at 00:39

      Thank you very much...keep supporting:)
      ♡♡♡

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  17. നിർമ്മൽകുമാർ കൈപ്പാറ1 February 2017 at 12:01

    No words..! Nice one.. Great effort...

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  18. Bloom11 February 2017 at 00:52

    Thank you so much dude...A late comment,but a cute one...haha..keep supporting.
    ♡♡♡

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